The Quiet One

I should have written a short story a long time ago. These reviews are from my friends who have no problem telling me when they don’t like something.
1. “Holy crackers! Scary thoughts & ideas which can pick at your brain are the kind Steven King writes.”
2. “Yours is scary, chilling & a brain picker. I’m glad that it’s you who has written it & that it’s fiction!!!”
3. “It is fiction, it is fiction, it IS fiction. I’m relieved that I wasn’t born in Cumberland.”

If it doesn’t get published I will put it here in its entirety.